martes, 8 de noviembre de 2011

WARM UP

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This is my video about how to do a good warm up. I hope you'll enjoy it :)

1 comentario:

  1. Good job. I like that you edited the videos down to a length where it is just enough to describe what you want to say. However, I think you needed to describe each of those in detail. I might be wrong. Here are some of the mistakes made. Changes are in ''quotes'' and comments are in (parenthesis)

    0:09
    The warm up is a ''series'' of exercises...
    It consists in ''moving'' or joints...

    0:15
    (Make sure your tenses match up. ''to run'' and ''moving'' are different tenses in the same sentence talking about the same thing)
    ''It'' consists ''of running'' in different ways ''and'' moving various parts of our body.

    1:38
    You always ''must do'' it before...

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